Tuesday, April 21, 2009

What's wrong with the Angels?

First it is a question headline, which should for the most part be avoided.
Second the sub-head reads- How about the bullpen having the highest ERA in majors?
So they answer the question to the headline in the sub-head and they answer it in the form of another question. Unnecessary could have just gone with something about the bullpen struggling.


This OC Register can be found here.

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